Monday, October 27, 2014

Ice more than Frost – v3

ice more than frost
on the flat surfaces
flat and slanted
even the doorway
all covered, frozen
an illusion, solid,
temperature still falling
well below freezing
melting only by applying
the exhaust of the engine
the car awakening slowly
from the blanket,
cocoon, its skin of ice


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edited October 27, 2014
Ice more than Frost – v3

(editing original again)
edited February 12, 2014
“Ice more than Frost – v2”
new poem October 23, 2013
“Ice more than Frost”
driving from Patten to Stacyville and
view of Mt. Katahdin
October 23, 2013
Edited September 17, 2013
painted with grains of sand – v6
Edited December 10, 2012
painted with grains of sand – v3
Edited December 10, 2012
November 20, 2012
the fields were alive with frost this morning
on NH Route 107 in Epsom, NH, Southbound,
with many vistas of white over the reeds and grain stalks, as
at 43.213132,-71.285279
going to the Deerfield Community School
November 19, 2012

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