Monday, March 30, 2015

herself on the altar – v8

she gave but two coins
how it looked, in object terms,
to the onlookers, to the priests
she gave but two coins
but she gave herself on the altar
the widow in the Temple
offering a gift to God

all that she had, her life,
she gave but two coins, a pittance,
to the onlookers, to the priests
she gave but two coins
but she gave all of what she had
she gave herself on the altar
her life offered unto God

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edited March 30, 2015
herself on the altar – v8

(merging edits to version 2 and version 7)
edited January 6, 2015
herself on the altar – v7
(editing version 1)
edited December 22, 2014
herself on the altar – v6
(editing version 1)
edited November 30, 2014
herself on the altar – v5
edited November 21, 2014
herself on the altar – v4
(editing version 3)
Edited January 4, 2014
herself on the altar – v3
Edited September 11, 2013
herself on the altar – v2
November 12, 2012
herself on the altar
Mark 12:41-44
Upper Room Disciplines for 2012
November 5, 2012 to November 11, 2012
“Risky Business”
by Martha Highsmith
for November 11, 2012,
read November 11, 2012
&
Mark 12:38-40
Psalm 127:1
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“Risky Business”
by Martha Highsmith
for November 10, 2012,
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Psalm 127:3-5
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“Risky Business”
by Martha Highsmith
for November 9, 2012,
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&
Ruth 4:13-17
Matthew 1:5-6
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“Risky Business”
by Martha Highsmith
for November 8, 2012,
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Ruth 3:1-5
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“Risky Business”
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for November 7, 2012,
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Psalm 127:1-2
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“Risky Business”
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for November 6, 2012,
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Hebrews 9:24-28
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“Risky Business”
by Martha Highsmith
for November 5, 2012,
read November 6, 2012
&
Hebrews 9
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